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The Realities of Publishing - On Editors

  • Apr. 29th, 2008 at 11:50 AM

I've been thinking about (and discussing) editors a lot lately. With my writer friends, I've discussed longform editors; and online (especially within the livejournal community) I've been watching discussions about (and by) shortform editors.

My friend Doug Cohen got my wheels turning with the sort-of rhetorical question, "why do writers argue with editors?" His context for asking (from the pov as assistant editor of Realms of Fantasy) was that a lot of writers who have had stories rejected (for whatever reason) seem to think they can get a different result by arguing with the editor - even when expressly told not to. (It's turned into an amateur rite of passage for people to piss off editor Nick Mamatas by questioning his judgment.)

Let me make my position as clear as possible. There is only one time when it is ever appropriate to argue (politely, appropriately, diplomatically, and RESPECTFULLY) with an editor: when they have already BOUGHT the story at issue, and are working WITH the writer to improve, tighten, improve, polish, and otherwise IMPROVE a story they already loved enough to commit time, resources, and money to.

And even then, "argue" is too loaded a term for the process; "discuss" is better. But again, it's the timing that makes the difference. When an editor like Doug asks the question above, "argue" fits - because it usually means a writer is trying to convince the editor, by argument, to reconsider their negative opinion of a story.

In shortform writing, arguing the reasons why an editor rejected a story is going to do nothing except alienate them to one's future work. In rejecting a piece, an editor either a) suggests changes; or b) simply doesn't like the story. So the writer can either make the changes (or not), or send a different story. And unless that writer's work really sucks potatoes, the editors would probably read any new stories submitted by that writer. But if you argue with them, all that happens is that the writer is screwing up the editor's perception of them personally, on top of having sent a story the editor didn't like.  Not a great basis for a writer/editor relationship. And bear this in mind: those editors ALREADY have GOOD relationships with hundreds of other writers who AREN'T arguing with them.

Regarding longform (novel) editors, it's not a good idea to argue with them, either. The stakes are higher, the work bigger, and so they may (in my experience) be more willing to argue (discuss) a book pre-deal. And that's what makes it an even WORSE idea than arguing with the shortform editors. Because it's very possible the writer would have a chance at winning the argument. To clarify, they'd win the battle of the book, and lose the war of the career.

Seasoned writers will sometimes struggle with this, so it's a harder thing to convince a new writer to believe in: you never, ever want to sell a book to an editor who has to be convinced, coerced, bribed, cajoled, pleaded, persuaded, or otherwise argued into buying your book. Because that hesitation on their part will carry through every stage of the very lengthy and expansive publishing process. That first step determines the direction every one that follows. Make it the right step. Don't sell your book until you have an editor who believes in it so strongly that they're willing to fight on your behalf within their own company. You want someone who will stake their own considerable reputation on the power of the work you have created. And if you can't find an editor like that, then perhaps it's the wrong time for that particular book.

Before HERE, THERE BE DRAGONS, I had opportunities to sell other books I'd written (and some, published); but the circumstances were not right. I had several chances to sell DRAGONS - and turned down several offers before being matched up with Simon & Schuster. Another major, major publisher was willing to be convinced - but was more interested in how the movie deal turned out. My editor at S&S, on the other hand, was totally in love with it after one phone call and a fifteen-page treatment.

Before the book was published, he introduced me to speak at the ALA by telling the audience, "What you are about to hear is the reason why, twenty years from now, you will remember being at this dinner."

Now, do you want an editor who says THAT, or the one who says, "Well, I guess I can take a chance on this, but it'll be a tough sell, and I don't really have a handle on it..."

It all comes down to something I say at every school presentation, repeat often, and tell myself every day: never give up what you want the most, for what you want most at that moment.

If you have to argue your way into a single sale, it may be at the expense of your entire career. Something to consider.

Comments

[info]mabfan wrote:
Apr. 29th, 2008 07:38 pm (UTC)
I've noticed that writers, especially newer writers, do tend to get defensive when their work is rejected or critiqued by an editor. When I was teaching high school students in a science fiction writing workshop, one of the things I did was try to explain to them that getting defensive about their work wouldn't be helpful in the real world.

For example, after I critiqued one student's story, she wanted to explain why she had written it the way she did, even with all the flaws present. I patiently explained to her that there was no need for her to say things like, "I meant for this to mean X," because I had already pointed out to her that it didn't work.
[info]coppervale wrote:
Apr. 29th, 2008 07:43 pm (UTC)
I've got a great balance with my editors. If they question or want to change something, I have to take it seriously, because it means I've missed something or was unclear. Conversely, if I say I want something to stay as is, they trust that I have a reason. But I always keep in mind that they are my first readers - and their enthusiasm affects everyone else in the company. So being defensive instead of making something read more clearly would only be counterproductive.
[info]scribblerworks wrote:
Apr. 29th, 2008 08:10 pm (UTC)
If they question or want to change something, I have to take it seriously, because it means I've missed something or was unclear.

This is the most basic thing, and perhaps the hardest thing for writers to learn about taking criticism.

I think that because writing is so very personal a thing, and the manifestation of the creative impluse so seemingly tenuous, it is hard to hear that "my baby" is not perfect. As you well know, at least with the other arts, one can tell when something in the creation is skewed: the composition of the picture isn't working, or the combination of notes in the music is discordant.

But writing, using language, particularly English with its slippery subtlety, isn't always doing for the audience what the writer thinks its doing.

But, it's also hard to admit "I've missed something or was unclear." It's hard to take that as fact. But you're right, arguing isn't going to get the writer where they want to be.

In my myth book, I had two major challenges to what had been written in the first draft. On one, a writer-friend I greatly respect challenged me on what I had written about good versus evil. And objectively, I had to agree with him, which meant sitting down and rewriting that. The other challenge came from the senior editor of the first place it had been submitted. He found the organization of the first section of the book confusing, and so rejected the whole on that basis. Again, I had to agree with him on that once I considered what he said. Result: another rewrite, that improved the whole, I think. Still... some things that editor just didn't "get", and I would have argued. He didn't "get" the title -- and I wasn't about to change that (for all sorts of reasons). Heh.

In The Mind of the Maker (I think it is), Dorothy L. Sayers says that truly good writing cannot be pulled apart. That has stuck with me, when I sit down to do polishes on a piece of writing. If I can eliminate things, and still have the meaning and effect (which means imagery and sound and rhythm) that I intended, then the cut has to be made. Anything superfluous ought to go. It was a hard lesson to learn, because I went through an extended period of purple prose. Heh. And I've been at this writing thing a long time. I wish it were easier for writers who are starting out to learn it.

(Sorry for burbling at this length. Obviously, stuff saved up from Saturday! Heh.)
[info]slushmaster wrote:
Apr. 29th, 2008 07:52 pm (UTC)
Interesting post. I'll add that in the short form, I occasionaly work with slush authors on revisions before passing their work up to Shawna. No $$$ is involved at this point, and no promise of it. And while I don't encourage arguing, I always let the author know if there are questions or concerns about my notes, he/she should feel free to discuss them. I had a similar experience with Jetse de Vries when I worked with him on a rewrite for a story I sent to Interzone. There was actually a lot of back and forth between us before we came up with something we were both comfortable with, but things always remained productive, professional, and respectful. And in the end I had my first sale. :)

So some short story editors may be open to discussion on rewrites, but how you go about working with them basically comes back to what you covered in your post. I say this as someone who has been on both sides of the rewrite process.
[info]coppervale wrote:
Apr. 29th, 2008 08:00 pm (UTC)
I mentioned you by name as a good example (and like what you wrote above. Jetse is also a great example of a smart editor, who has good judgment.)

The most important thing is getting a dialogue going with an editor - immediate sale or not. If there's a dialogue, then good material has a better chance of being worked out and published. But arguing a rejection, or unwillingness to revise(!) is just not moving forward in any way.
[info]lisamantchev wrote:
Apr. 29th, 2008 07:52 pm (UTC)
On nice thing is that I was never tempted to argue with book editors because all the submissions, offers and rejections came through my agent.

And I've never been tempted to argue with a shortform editor because that would be like shooting myself in the foot. I have bitten my tongue. I have crossed magazines off of my List Of Places to Submit. But arguing in e-mail or complaining about an editor on your blog just reeks of unprofessionalism. And no one wants to work with someone with a rep for being a pain in the backside.
[info]coppervale wrote:
Apr. 29th, 2008 08:01 pm (UTC)
It helps that you have a smart agent. And he knows I think that. ;)
[info]lisamantchev wrote:
Apr. 29th, 2008 08:09 pm (UTC)
Another agent wouldn't put the author in the position to argue with a prospective editor, would they? *rather appalled by the idea*
[info]coppervale wrote:
Apr. 29th, 2008 08:13 pm (UTC)
Some have - on the basis that "a" deal was more important than "The" deal, yes.
[info]slushmaster wrote:
Apr. 29th, 2008 07:55 pm (UTC)
I meant some short story ASSISTANT editors. :)
[info]green_knight wrote:
Apr. 29th, 2008 08:32 pm (UTC)
As a not-yet-published writer I can both see the wisdom of 'you want an editor who really loves your writing and your story' and the temptation of 'if I dress it up a bit better, I will have a sale! a sale!!!'

And in some ways, the industry isn't helping. We're told we need to write smarter queries, catch the editor's eye, build a platform, have a website, self-promote, submit to more markets. 'Learn to write better' is advice that doesn't seem to be around a lot these days - it's all about treating writing as a business. And in most other businesses, you're expected to make the product more palatable to the customer. If someone doesn't want to buy your used car, you're not going to buy another car to offer to them, you're going to polish it up and throw in free carpets. So I'm not entirely surprised to find the same mentality among writers.

[info]plattcave wrote:
Apr. 29th, 2008 08:35 pm (UTC)
The lesson I constantly take away from your journal is that writers should value their own work, and to hold out for the deal/relationship that they and their writing deserve.
[info]coppervale wrote:
Apr. 29th, 2008 08:46 pm (UTC)
I can't quote the discussion this sentiment came from, except to note that Harlan Ellison and Neil Gaiman were both in the room when it took place, and it was a major topic of discussion: Most people don't want to write. They want to be writers.

And as a result, what they end up valuing is the reputation more than the career. If you want a big book deal but settled for a small one, it might be because you wanted to see that book in print more than you wanted it to firm up the base of your career. I wouldn't blame anyone for making that choice - but I'd hope not to hear them complain about it afterwards, either.

There are a huge number of factors in play in making these kinds of choices - all I can really speak from is my own experience (which has included a number of lousy decisions as well). But if you have a book deal that you thought should have been better - why did you say yes?
[info]plattcave wrote:
Apr. 30th, 2008 12:52 pm (UTC)
But if you have a book deal that you thought should have been better - why did you say yes?

Take that further -- if you have any deal in you're life that isn't good enough, don't take it!
[info]hijinx400 wrote:
Apr. 29th, 2008 08:43 pm (UTC)
Wow - your timing is impeccable :) We just received our first draft back from our editor (today, in fact) with her substantive edits. Regardless of the size of your ego - even if it is nonexistent - you can't help but feel a little bit bruised when something you have worked so hard on is found to have flaws. But I have no desire to argue with her about the suggestions she has made.

We are lucky in that 1) we have a signed contract, 2) our editor is the same person who approached my co-writer and suggested he write a book in the first place, so she is most definitely our biggest cheerleader, and 3) she is also a writer with the same publisher and writes the same type of books that we are in the process of writing - and she is very successful at it. We'd be insane to argue with her suggestions and requested changes.

Now I have to go lock myself up for another month doing the 2nd draft :) Will still be reading and will comment when I can. I've already told you how much all this insight helps me, but it bears repeating. Thanks.
[info]coppervale wrote:
Apr. 29th, 2008 08:48 pm (UTC)
You're welcome.

If it helps, my books go through about five rounds of edits. The last substantial one (the outside editor) came back with around 200 post-its. This is AFTER a few good rounds of edits. But it's all worth it.
[info]nihilistic_kid wrote:
Apr. 29th, 2008 08:54 pm (UTC)
Eh, the overwhelming majority of writers don't argue with editors. I just tend to make spectacles of those that do.

Of those, btw, three were certified long-term mental patients and occasional guests of the state. Two others were simply engaging in fraud -- in addition to flipping out about my rejections, both members of this set had actually submitted to me a story that had already been published even though I only want stories with first rights still available.

There were two who should have known better, but who decided that they since they were older and have also edited this or that in the past, that I needed instruction.

The rest were the usual amateur hour sorts, folks with lulu.com and Amazon Shorts "credits", long histories of not selling anything anywhere except by occasional fluke (and even then, only to undistinguised micromarkets)...you know, the right end of the bell curve.

Essentially, the people who argue with editors, or at least, those who argued with me, demonstrated problems other than a failure of etiquette. I've yet to have a really "new" writer argue with me, except in ways that are so obviously naive that I am inclined to forgive (and I do).
[info]coppervale wrote:
Apr. 29th, 2008 09:16 pm (UTC)
I think Doug nailed it (and helped me clarify a direction I was going) - that there's a difference between arguing and constructive dialogue with an editor.

One thing I tell new writers is that they may not want an immediate "yes" from an editor; what might be even better is "I'd like to see more."

Some of the types you mention are rampant in comics - it's the sense of entitlement that kills me. That I should want to buy what they do because they "deserve" it, and not because I myself can see its value...

Thanks for the comment, Nick. Well-stated.
[info]scribblerworks wrote:
Apr. 29th, 2008 10:23 pm (UTC)
I do realize how tempting it is to fall into that sense of entitlement and "I deserve this break". Heck, I've spent seven years cultivating relationships with comics editors -- don't I "deserve" a break with them? Heh.

But the fact is, from their point of view, the money comes from work that "knocks the socks off", and that is not created by me thinking I've already worked long enough and hard enough to get the break. It comes from doing this work to my absolute best.
[info]jpantalleresco wrote:
Apr. 30th, 2008 07:37 am (UTC)


Really? You'd think in comics writers would want to be edited more, not less. Dialouge can make or break a comic. If it sounds too cliche it doesn't sound real and no matter how pretty the pictures are it can lose connection with the readers.

Hope you're doing well boss.

JP
[info]scribblerworks wrote:
Apr. 30th, 2008 04:29 pm (UTC)
Ah, but in comics, I suspect that it's not just the cliches that need editing. There are those writers who forget that they're working with an artist who is also contributing to the heavy lifting of the storytelling, and so they over-write.
[info]janni wrote:
Apr. 29th, 2008 11:50 pm (UTC)
"...never give up what you want the most, for what you want most at that moment."

Much, much wisdom there.

Also much wisdom about the importance of working with people who (while willing to edit and improve it) already love much of what you're already doing. Been discovering that one anew on my current project--it makes a huge difference.

And I find myself thinking of another project that was rejected a while back (entirely different folks involved there), and about how, reading the reasons it didn't work for them, I thought: I'm so glad they decided this now, because they never would have liked what I was aiming for here, had we gone on. Having the work rejected wasn't half so painful as I suspect not having it rejected ultimately would have been.

Yeah, the editor and publisher have to believe as strongly as we do, or it all falls apart.
[info]coppervale wrote:
Apr. 29th, 2008 11:59 pm (UTC)
The same discretion applies to choosing your reps. I had a manager once who thought so little of my art she once mailed a five foot wide original back to me in torn down fedex boxes.

I just had a gallery show featuring that same piece, not five miles away from that other manager's office - arranged by my new manager, who sees the same value in the work that I did.

World of difference.
[info]janni wrote:
Apr. 30th, 2008 12:05 am (UTC)
Yep. Literary agents, too--I went from being a not-quite-commercial writer to a commercial writer simply by changing agents -- the work is more or less the same.

Edited at 2008-04-30 12:06 am (UTC)
[info]scribblerworks wrote:
Apr. 30th, 2008 12:20 am (UTC)
Oh. My. God. You horrify me with that story!

I mean, even if the work wasn't to her taste (a possibility), one would think that the obvious amount of work involved in the piece would have justified a bit more care! My mind boggles at it.

I understand that some people don't know how to ship such things, but how difficult is it to call the artist and ask?

Okay, I'm going to go bang my head on something for a while to get that out of my head.

(And have nightmares too, because you've stirred up memories of my own "You did what to my art?!?" experiences.)
[info]jetse wrote:
May. 2nd, 2008 10:56 pm (UTC)
James--

Thanks for the kind words in your answer to Doug's comment. Like Doug, I've been on both sides of the fence (actually, I did a rewrite with Nick Mamatas -- also in this thread -- before he published me in Clarkesworld Magazine), and I can only concur. Behave like a professional at all times and when your writing is up to scratch chances are good that some editor might want to buy your work.

Like Nick said, the utmost majority of submitters do behave professionally: in my experience there's approximately one bad apple in every two to three hundred submissions: arguing with the rejection (I've been told that I don't understand literature, and similar things), wilfully submitting reprints while we look for original stories (like Nick, I forgive rookie mistakes), and other misbehaviour.

I do try to be sympathetic, because I've made all those mistakes myself when I started out writing short fiction. Thing is, I like to think that I learned from my mistakes (so I don't make the same mistake again), and hope that beginning writers do that, as well.

Finally, a lot of (beginning) writers think that an editor must hate them, after rejecting so many of their stories. That is a great misunderstanding, for two reasons:

1) Editors reject stories, never people(*);

2) I (and I'm fairly sure other editors think the same) don't care how many bad or unmemorable stories a writer has sent my way before: I forget those anyway (there are more important things taking up my memory space), and the moment I read a story that works for me, I will gladly recommend it to my colleagues, and forget all the other stories by the same author that didn't work for me.

(*) Unless, indeed, they behave like idiots.
[info]madwriter wrote:
May. 13th, 2008 09:25 pm (UTC)
I even get paranoid about asking an editor to clarify something they've said in a rejection letter. I try to approach that with almost meek politeness. On the other hand, an editor did buy a poem of mine after I figured out what he was unclear about, and when he saw the resulting change he much liked it.

So that was encouraging--and no arguing whatsoever was involved.